new sponsor & giveaway : goldsmith jewelers
one of my favorite companies and clients is goldsmith jewelers -this family-run business in provo, utah is now online! all my fine jewelry comes from them --and lucky you, Sussy readers, they are giving away this necklace! valued at $2000, this 14 kt white gold pumpkin garnet and diamond necklace is looking for a home! leave your comment here by sunday at midnight for a chance to win. the catch? your comment MUST rhyme. (why? i'm not sure. just do it.) thanks, goldsmith!
Come on lucky # one
ReplyDeleteLets not stop all the fun!
:)
chasingdavies@gmail.com
i love goldsmith.
ReplyDeletethey are the best.
they made my custom wedding ring--
oh how it sparkled perfectly next to my white dress.
i really want this pumpkin garnet.
it would fit happily 'round my neck.
oh please, please pick me!
i'd be so grateful and never ever forget.
nice jewelry? i own not a thing
ReplyDeleteI'd love to win me some fancy bling
so pretty and fine
ReplyDeletei wish it were mine!
trying not to bemoan
ReplyDeletea rhyme that'll give me a stone
Please oh please, I'll cross my fingers, that around my neck this garnet will linger :)
ReplyDeletejenniferbunnell@yahoo.com
totally gorg!!
ReplyDeleteBlue clue flu mew?
ReplyDeleteI'm 6,100 words into a 50,000 word novel for NaNoWriMo. That's the best I got right now. But dang, that necklace is pretty!
love it (sigh) :) perhaps that would get my husbands attention :(
ReplyDeletethat necklace would be,
ReplyDeleteso perfect for me!
i'd look oh so fancy doing the dishes,
ohhh let me win this and grant me my wishes!
A rhyme you say,
ReplyDeleteWell I am stumped
For this necklace
I would be pumped
Cheeseball!!!
how lovely is this beautiful thing
ReplyDeleteperhaps I would buy a matching ring?
Oh, how I love jewelry,
ReplyDeleteEspecially in contests and other tom foolery.
A diamond and pumpkin garnet in white gold
Is a delight I'd like to behold!
With a bit of luck I could win,
Now, let the contest really begin!
A pumpkin colored garnet and a diamond to boot!
ReplyDeleteHow I'd love to get my hands on that loot.
gimme gimme
ReplyDeletefor this necklace, i would shimmy shimmy.
please pick me!
Eeny, meena, mina, mo,
ReplyDeleteCatch this necklace by the toe;
If all the other girls squeal, I won't let go,
Eena, meena, mina, mo
Couldn't find a word to rhyme with pumpkin
ReplyDeleteGuess I'm too much of a country bumpkin
If I had this gem around my neck
I'd be climbing the social ladder like heck.
Wow that is a bad rhyme.
What can I say, I'm just putting in the time.
I need this jewelry,
ReplyDeleteIt's not Tomfoolery!
Goldsmith jewelers once employed my big brother
ReplyDeleteI want to win this necklace like no other!
i have the perfect fancy dress with shoes to match,
ReplyDeleteand if i had this sussy...i'd sparkle, natch.
this necklace is so fine
ReplyDeletei want it to be mine
the garnet is my birthstone
i want it to be mine alone
please pick me pick me
it will give me lots of glee!
oh shiny!
ReplyDeleteI wish it were miney.
(rhyming was never my talent...)
The thought of winning this pretty pumpkin bling,
ReplyDeleteSure makes me want to dance and sing!
She's so shiny and bright...
Perfect for a special night.
So, "smith of gold", I do hope you pick me...
My neck would look lovely as can be!
all the rhymes I was makin'
ReplyDeletehave already been taken!
i just LOVE that beautiful garnet
DARN IT!!!
when i saw that we must rhyme, i thought, "now, really?"
ReplyDeletei must admit, it makes me feel a little bit silly.
but i really like this necklace; it's so pretty!
and for a chance to win, i'd even sing a little ditty.
(but please don't make me.)
:)
I love the color of the stone
ReplyDeletebut I dont have 2000 bones
If I could be the one to win
Upon my face you'd find a grin!
jananeser@gmail.com
goldsmith, goldsmith what can i say?
ReplyDeleteyour giveaway touched me in a way i cannot say.
with craftmanship so fine, how cannot i wish it to be mine
i'll check to see if i've won everyday!
it's truly sublime
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ReplyDeleteI've dresses and shoes,
ReplyDeleteThis all would seem bliss!
Though rich I may seem,
I'm poor without this!
I just adore this little charm
ReplyDeleteIt's tiny, simple, orange
I'd keep it safe, away from harm
Wait, nothing rhymes with orange....
I really hope that you can see
ReplyDeletethat this prize would mean so much to me
(Never claimed I was a poet haha)
Oh Pick Me, Pick Me, Ohh Pumpkin necklace I see!!!!!
ReplyDeleteMichelle Torres
cingulwasme@aol.com
A pretty jewel for around the neck,
ReplyDeleteFor day or night, oh heck.
I would love that stone so shiny,
There's no way I could be whiny.
Pumpkin garnet come to me,
you are no doubt the bees knees!
Oh wouldn't life be FINE,
ReplyDeleteIf that classy Goldsmith's necklace would be MINE.
Around my neck it would SHINE.
Oh me, me, please pick me!
ReplyDeleteI'm the greatest! You'll see!
if i were to win this pretty bling
ReplyDeletei would throw my hands up, holla + sing!
The necklace is what I covet
ReplyDeleteso pick me, I would love it!
Garnet is my birthstone,
and this is exactly what I need to own!!
this giveaway sure is exciting,
ReplyDeletethose jewels seem to flash just like lightning!
i hope i am picked;
if not, i'll be ticked!
goldsmith jewelers makes it all so enticing.
May providence smile,
ReplyDeleteI've never one a mile. (or a contest!)
a rhyming comment
ReplyDeleteokay, let's see
i think that necklace
should come home to me!
With words I am not so witty,
ReplyDeletebut I think this is oh so pretty,
so I will do this little ditty.
Oh my, Oh my,
ReplyDeleteI'm not going to lie,
If I won that, I might just cry.
(a modification of my child's favorite book... I would sing this to my necklace everyday if I won!)
ReplyDeletePumpkin garnet, I have a thing to tell you,
And it won't take long.
The way I feel about you,
Is a kind of a song.
OOOOOOO! Pumpkin garnet of mine,
Everything about you is especially fine!
I love what you are,
I love what you do,
OOOOOOO! Pumpkin garnet I LOVE YOU!
I love how this necklace shines, to wear it would make me feel so divine! rbnewo@yahoo.com
ReplyDeleteA gorgeous necklace for me?
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to wear it for all to see.
A limerick for the occasion:
ReplyDeleteThere once was a golden-hued garnet
With a glimmer so pure I said, "darn it!"
I must have that piece,
to place in the crease,
upon my fair chest, that'll larn it!
I love me a little bling.
ReplyDeleteIt makes me want to sing!
To have that sparkly round my neck.
My friends will be as jealous as heck!
Oh how I want this,
ReplyDeleteit'd give me nothing but bliss.
These gorgeous new jewels
ReplyDeleteWould make my heart sing,
So please don't be cruel:
Send me some bling!
A necklace for ME, how can that BE?
ReplyDeleteThat is most certainly what I'd proclaim
If only you picked my name. :-)
I may not be a country bumpkin, but I think my neck needs a little pumpkin.
ReplyDeleteMy wife's birthday is coming soon
ReplyDeleteI'd like to give her a great gift under the full moon
Oh that necklace is divine! Hanging on my neck I'd look so fine!
ReplyDeleteHow gorgeous and unique
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you gave us a peak;
I hope I am chosen to win
For I will surely wear it again and again!
I'm a capricorn
ReplyDeleteThis necklace should be worn
by one who was born
early in the morn.
Garnet is my birthstone and this necklace is gorgeous.
this necklace is gorgeous.
ReplyDeletenot sure where i'd go if i wore this,
but if it were mine,
i wear it all the time,
because this necklace is gorgeous.
that's the best i could do...
This necklace is so pretty
ReplyDeletethat I tried to think of something witty....
Nothing came,
apparently right now I am lame :(
With this necklace I wont be
and my life would be filled with glee
One, Two, Three, Four
ReplyDeleteHope my luck isn't run out, I've never won before!
Five, Six, Seven, Eight
Pumpkin Garnet & white diamond hung by silver strait!
Nine, ten, eleven, twelve
If I don't win this, into my karma I must delve!
That's was pretty lame, but at least it rhymes!
Thanks for the giveaway!
For my movie to the city
ReplyDeleteI want to a blingy pretty
I'd be reckless if I didn't comment to win this necklace!
ReplyDeleteI really want this necklace
ReplyDeleteI'll wear it at breakfast
And lunch and dinner too
I'll feel ever so pretty
It will make me more witty
And alluring and charming, it's true!
A comment that rhymes, now that's a test. I want that necklace more than the rest.
ReplyDeleteMy oh my I would look so fly with this pretty little thing with me for all my days. The color is rocking and it's so sparkling! Please oh please say you will be mine?
ReplyDeletethat's the best I could do at 8am! :) Thanks for the pretty giveaway! :)
This necklace would be great for my mom.
ReplyDeleteBecause she is the Bomb dot com.
I stink at rhymes... but I love your giveaway!
I hate to rhyme
ReplyDeletebut will play the game
This one time
For that piece of fame.
I never win these kinds of games
ReplyDeleteyet still I choose to add my name
This little prize is 'specially nice
Would it be cheating to enter twice?
This necklace is no country bumpkin,
ReplyDeleteIf I don't win I might turn into a pumpkin.
This necklace reminds me of cinderella,
and i think it's pretty Stellaaaa :)
I'm not very good at poetry,
but I'd LOVE this necklace..etry.. haha
Christina
alwayssmilin04@yahoo.com
I would love some new jewelry
ReplyDeleteHopefully the winner will be me!
Is the hope for this necklace
ReplyDeletesomething quite feckless?
Susan
drsus123@hotmail.com
You don't have to be bold to wear white gold. And pumpkin garnet? I really want it, darn it! :)
ReplyDeletethis pendant's stupendous.
ReplyDeleteLovely, gorgeous shiny jewels,
ReplyDeleteEveryone knows Goldsmith's rules.
Oh how I'd love this fancy chain
I would dance and sing in the rain.
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ReplyDeletewinning this giveaway would save a little money for my honey!
ReplyDeletewin, win, win
ReplyDeletethe pumpkin
this necklace should be mine
ReplyDeletecuz'i dont even own a dime
goldsmith jewelers is the bomb,
ReplyDeleteif i win this necklace i won't stay calm!
Goldsmith degigned my wedding ring
ReplyDeleteWinning this would be a lovly thing.
If I won,
ReplyDeleteThat would be fun.
making my rhyme just in time!
ReplyDeleteTo not want this necklace--that would be reckless!
the holidays are comin'
ReplyDeletethat pumpkin i'd be lovin'
Oh how I adore
ReplyDeleteBrowsing Goldsmith's online store.
And this lovely blog?
Why, every day I'm all agog
To see what's new
And and pretty too!
Diamonds may be my friends
ReplyDeleteBut I can't eat them in the end
Pumpkins however I'll eat
Wearing one will be a treat
If I win, it'll be fine by me!
ReplyDeleteI will wear this necklace for all to see!
how pretty, how sweet!
ReplyDeletewinning this would be a treat!
Just like Cinderella, who had a pumpkin at her ball, I'd be the most beautiful of all!
ReplyDeleteIf you read my blog you'd see,
ReplyDeleteThat this gem was made for me.
The heroine of my book has found,
Something like this in the ground.
Around my neck it would be,
Til she found her destiny.
The date of the post was Halloween,
Just please say hi if you stop by!
I know those last two lines don't rhyme.
I just ran out of time!
With this necklace
ReplyDeleteI would not be reckless
for it would look too good, just there
with my reddish hair!
(Thanks for the opportunity, Nicole!)
j
oh how happy I would be, if the reader you chose to win was me!
ReplyDeleteThere once was a girl in the city
ReplyDeleteWho loved to wear jewelry quite pretty
And truth may be told
That this girl loves white gold
With a diamond and garnet, so witty!
I've never won
ReplyDeletenot a thing not a ton
this could be my chance...
a beautiful pendant necklace!
Around my neck
ReplyDeleteI'd never cease
To wear this gem.
(Oh, pretty please!)
Beautiful little necklace
ReplyDeleteIf chance would be so kind,
To lay rest on my sister
Her neck a home you'd find.
Beautitul little necklace
to no longer wander lost,
I'm grateful for this contest,
For a rhyme's the only cost.
rachel.darley@gmail.com
i want this BAD!
ReplyDeleteIf i lost i'd be so sad...
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ReplyDeletehow great would this look
ReplyDeletesparkling on my neck
no money in the bank
so can't write a check
so winning this gem is
the only way to go
to own a fab new bling
to add to all my faux!
i got no rhyming skills
ReplyDeletebut i love this giveway by nicolehill
This month is my birthday and I want to win!
ReplyDeleteIf my number's not chosen t'will be a sin.
Here's the thing, I need some new bling, and if I don't win, I might have to crin (ge).
ReplyDeleteDoes near rhyme count? :)
Ordinary bling is okay for some;
ReplyDeletebangles, men's watches, carved rings on a thumb.
But I adore the precious and rare; fine metals and stones, something with flair.
Killer design, deep rich color ashimmer; let me be the one to be this prize winner.
No longer a patch-worked grad student I'd be
ReplyDeleteWith sparkling classy jewelry.
Like playing dress up with my mum's heels,
A true grown up woman is how I'd feel.
A pumpkin garnet surely would help me face
The move to a new city, job and place.
I'm just trying for the ell-uv-it
ReplyDeleteMy name I will submit
I would surely love to win
Is that such a sin?
I love me some bling
ReplyDeleteand I need more than just my wedding ring. :)
Just bought a house,
ReplyDeleteNow I'm poor as a mouse.
This little "bling"
could be just the thing
pumpkin colored stone
be a delight to own
to brighten my day
and make all okay!
(sorry, not so great at rhyming...now haikus...I can do haikus!)
OH please pick me
ReplyDeletei love it you see!!!
Oh what a beauty,
ReplyDeletebut there's one small duty:
to offer this rhyme
for the necklace, sublime.
So, here is my song,
for the necklace I long.
And I will sing
for that BEAUTIFUL bling! :)
I hint, and hint, and hint and hint
ReplyDeleteFor something sparkly or shiny
The husband just laughs
and says I got a yard and some grass
instead of something sparkly or shiny.
(That was lame-o, I know) ;-)
Oh this necklace is so sparkly,
ReplyDeleteNot at all like Charles Barkley.
Booyah! I nailed that rhyme.
Oh that necklace is so pretty
ReplyDeleteI wish I was more clever and witty
Though I am not, I still want to win
I cannot rhyme but I can do a pirouette spin!
I'll have to hide my head in shame
ReplyDeletebecause my rhyming skill are lame.
ow wow!
ReplyDeletehow i want that now.
it shines so bright
on my neck it would look so right.
Oh what to write, what to write...
ReplyDeleteMust be clever, not too trite.
Not too long, but not 2 lines,
I want this necklace, want to shine.
Pretty please pick me! Pick me!
(Is that too desperate? How embarrassing!)
I majored in English--this should be easy.
Just give me the necklace! I'm deserving!!
Oh how I love things shiny and bright,
ReplyDeletePick me and your life will always go right!
Pumpkins are delicious in pies.
ReplyDeleteBut behold before my eyes,
a so-named stone
I must have for my own.
Oh please! Let me win this prize!
I would love to wear the sparkly jewel.
ReplyDeleteIt is oh-so-beautiful and cool!
The pumpkin reminds me of fall
and to me the bling calls...
This giveaway is the greatest I've ever seen
ReplyDeleteI hope I'm so lucky to win me the bling!
(I also hope this is random and not judged based on creativity of rhymes. Because I stink.)
this would be a great hit
ReplyDeletei must admit
for my teenage daughter
who would hollar...
i gave it a try!
pretty things
ReplyDeleteshiny rings
precious stones
i'm jones....'n
Oh this necklace is so DIVINE!!!
ReplyDeleteHow I wish it were mine!!!
This necklace is such a cool cut,
ReplyDeleteit makes we want it, but,
inorder to get it I must win,
please pick me and I will grin.
Ooo...so pretty and shiny,
ReplyDeletePlease give it to me kindly!
girls think its fun to wear things shiny
ReplyDeleteas long as it doesn't enlarge their hiney.
Im not quite sure what i meant by that
but ill take it if it doesn't make me look fat.
hahaha
could goldsmith jewelers
ReplyDeletebe any cooler?
it would be lovely to secure
a necklace so beautiful and demure.
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ReplyDeleteSparkling white and amber in color
ReplyDeleteThese jewels would charm me like no other!
How awesome that they're doing this!! :)
Goldsmith, Goldsmith, oh the memories
ReplyDeleteGoldsmith, Goldsmith, my friends, not enemies.
There my father worked for years
There he even pierced my ears
It happened when I was only five
the first ear hurt so bad, so I did strive
to convince my parents I only needed one
I would start a new trend, it would be fun.
My plan didn't work, he pierced the other
it wasn't too bad, and I matched my mother.
Goldsmith, Goldsmith, oh the memories
Goldsmith, Goldsmith, my friends, not enemies.
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ReplyDeleteplease please please
ReplyDeleteI will take pretty pictures and say "Cheese"
Just make this necklace mine
and I will be looking oh so fine.
The shape of this garnet is the same as my wedding RING.
ReplyDeleteIf I won this beautiful necklace it would make me SING!
And I don't sing, so that just shows you how much I would love it.
Oooo, this necklace is so nice.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't afford the price.
I hope I win it so it's free.
It would look so good on me.
Wow, I'm quite the poet. I wasn't even aware of that fact. :)
Oh what a beautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteI could wear it to my Thanksgiving feast!
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ReplyDeleteLaw school is drab, this pendant is fab!
ReplyDeleteWith craftsmanship beyond compare,
ReplyDeleteThis necklace I would proudly wear.
Garnet, diamond, gold so fine,
Goldsmith Jewler's... make it mine!
stephkearl(at)gmail[dot]com
I love it, I love it, I love it- oh yes!
ReplyDeleteTo win this necklace, I would be so blessed!
Thanks!
this necklace is so great
ReplyDeleteit causes a feeling the opposite of hate.
:)
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ReplyDeleteSparkle and shimmer
ReplyDeleteOh, what a glimmer.
This necklace
Would make me feel so precious.
HA! Not a poet. But this necklace is BEAUTIFUL. I would love to represent some Utah talent (being from Utah! )
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ReplyDeleteI am a cute country bumpkin.
ReplyDeleteMy body is shaped like a pumpkin.
Some call it a pear,
(But they've not seen it bare)
And a necklace to match would be Zen.
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ReplyDeleteI love the Fellers!
ReplyDeleteThey always make my day-
And if I won this necklace I'd have to shout Hurray!!
Cheesey? :) they really are the best family.
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ReplyDeleteOh, what a lovely little thing
ReplyDeleteTo match my favorite garnet ring.
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ReplyDeleteI just became a mother,
ReplyDeleteand I love the beautiful pumpkin color!
holy heck!
I'd love this gem around my neck!
-jennie
oh how i love to sparkle and shine...
ReplyDeleteto win this necklace would be so very divine!!!
Pick me, pick me goldsmith jeweler...
I'll think you are that much cooler!
haha why not do two rhymes instead of one...double my chances?!?!
Gimme the bling,
ReplyDeleteI think it's my thing :-)
Here's my ditty:
ReplyDeleteIt's so pretty!
Here's my rhyme:
ReplyDeleteIs it time
To pick the winner?
Make my dinner,
Do my hair,
I'm not wearing
Underwear!
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ReplyDeletehere's a limerick:)
ReplyDeleteA pumpkin garnet as big as the ritz
How it sparkles and shines, WHAT A GLITZ!!!
Well my mommy's turning fifty,
and to win this will be nifty!
If not my heart'll break into bits :)
thanks lots! :)
frances
Your hair may not be plaited gold,
ReplyDeleteBut as braided bold pendant adorns your throat,
You’ll look regal as a ruler on her throne;
Goldsmith Jewelers have set diamond and garnet stones,
A fiery signet of elegance,
To highlight fair essence and help beauty glow.
Cinderella, in my version of the story,
ReplyDeleteMore likely expected to be turned into a pumpkin
Than to be whisked to glory and land such a handsome fella;
Sleeping Beauty, ‘tis likely knew her duty,
But her story’s magic, for me, has torn fabric
Since she lacked gumption.
For what prince worth having would just arrive and kiss
A random, dreaming maiden’s lips?
Ok, so I’ve come to grips that he might,
But he’d ride off into the sunset that very night
With laughter rather than a happily ever after
Promptly, unless both he and Beauty
Had more than a potion to earn devotion!
But wait, friend, now I’ve found a better than fairy tale ending,
Since this contest isn’t about lending,
Instead, “The End” is reached thankfully
With my very real and deserving wife’s neck laced gracefully
By the gift of Goldsmith Jeweler’s
Exquisite white gold, diamond garnet grandeur.
As through a prism I remember
ReplyDeleteShining hours my wife and I’ve spent together;
How we met at the mall bookstore,
Penning first pages of our love at its shore.
Five years have sailed by since our wedding,
And I still seek a glass to show full spectrum of my feeling;
Words alone lack light to capture my wife’s rainbow of colors.
Upon my life, how I long to offer her a better token,
A gift more priceless than any thought I have ever spoken!
For me, this contest is not about winning just a fine necklace;
It transcends wishes fitful with symbol more tangible,
Provides me a way to make my love visible.
tres jolie...
ReplyDeleteas pretty as can be
perhaps maybe...
it will belong to me?
oh my heck that would look around my neck!
ReplyDeleteOh, what a treat!
ReplyDeleteI won't wear it on my feet!
Such a beauty on my neck--
I wouldn't have to spend my disability check!
(P.S.--not on disability.)
Match this with a sexy gown
ReplyDeleteAnd I'd take this beauty out on the town.
my mama would think this is nice
ReplyDeleteseeing how it's full of pumpkin spice
to her christmas morning i'd bestow
so that my love for her she would know...
Only a smith of gold
ReplyDeletecould turn metal so cold
into a work of art
to warm my sweet's heart
that necklace would look great! i swear!
ReplyDeleteeven in my underwear!
xo
e
I have to confess...
ReplyDeletethat what I need, is the necklace.
Because without it, I would be a mess.
This fabulous jewel
ReplyDeleteI would love to win
So please dont be cruel
Put my name in!
I would love to win this sparkly,
ReplyDeleteI would even fight Charles Barkley.
Sorry that was so lame,
But you're the one who asked for this silly game.
I really do not know how to rhyme
ReplyDeletebut boy it would be sublime
to wear it around my neck
and no longer would I be a wreck!
That time of year thou mayst in me behold,
ReplyDeleteWhen yellow leaves, or none, or few do hang
Upon those boughs which shake against the cold,
Bare ruined choirs, where late the sweet birds sang.
In me thou seest the twilight of such day,
As after sunset fadeth in the west,
Which by and by black night doth take away,
Death's second self that seals up all in rest.
In me thou seest the glowing of such fire,
That on the ashes of his youth doth lie,
As the death-bed, whereon it must expire,
Consumed with that which it was nourished by.
This thou perceiv'st, which makes thy love more strong,
To love that well, which thou must leave ere long.
I'd be more than just a cutie-patootie,
ReplyDeleteIf I could get me that there beauty.
look at this necklace so pretty and bold, it truly is a site to behold. i would love it and wear it if it were mine, for i currently don't own jewelry this fine. oh sussy and goldsmith thank you so much, hopefully soon this necklace will i touch.
ReplyDeleteOde to silver, diamond and pumpkin garnet
ReplyDeleteWrapped around my neck; a large anklet
A beautiful bauble for all to see
A fun giveaway; please pick me!
Something in pumpkin
ReplyDeletewould be perfect for this country bumpkin
I'd look so classy
while feeling extra sassy!
Halloween is over, it was just so fun,
ReplyDeleteto dress up little munchkins
and cut our large pumpkins,
I saw a fine necklace
I surely would love,
So I will continue to check if I won
Oh, how thrilled I would be
ReplyDeleteif this necklace was made for me.
Oh, it would just fill my heart with glee!
I love it, it is so pretty!
ReplyDeleteMakes me want to sing a little ditty!
Pleeeease pick me!!!
many other comments and i only get one,
ReplyDeleteit's not very likely you'll say that i won.
ilovemyleni(at)gmail(dot)com
Pumpkin garnets for a tiny rhyme?
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely worth the time!
Please pick me I'd love to win
ReplyDeleteThe necklace would make me grin
My rhyming skills have always stunk
But maybe they will bring me luck.
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThere was an old lady from Nantucket...
ReplyDeleteNo, really, I jest
My rhyme is the best
I'm destined to win
My neck's prettier than the rest
And if I don't, lest
You think we are snotty out West
Know that each day can't begin
Until I've visited your online nest
my neck needs these jewels.
ReplyDeleteforgot all those fools.
pick me pick me.
i'll look so pretty.
rhyming is not my thing
ReplyDeletemaybe i need some bling.
if i could just win this
i would be in absolute bliss.
good luck at the art weekend!
Oh how happy I'd be
ReplyDeleteif the winner was me!
aamiller2@mac.com
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ReplyDeletei figured i'd comment,
ReplyDeletebecause really, what the heck?
it's a two grand necklace
that would look gorgeous on my neck.
though i never win anything,
i honestly have the worst luck,
but the teeniest chance of winning?
that's serious bang for their buck.
haha.
i want this necklace it looks so fine,
ReplyDeletepleace pick me and make it mine
i love the necklace it is so pretty,
that is the end of this little ditty.
all of my jewels turn my skin green
ReplyDeleteI could use an upgrade if you know what i mean.
Goldsmith is much fancier than Forever 21
to have this piece would be REAL FUN!
i am not a poet.
pumpkins are cool.
ReplyDeletei am a fool
for thinking i will be picked
out of 198 people.
( The first two lines rhymed. I went with free verse the second two, to be trendy )
i really need a garnet, darn it! ;)
ReplyDeleteI would love to win it!
ReplyDeleteIt has inspired our wit.
It's such a beauty,
and will transform it's wearer into a cutie.
With it I am smitten,
It far surpasses what I've written.